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Big corporate email providers read and scan every message that passes through their servers. Your conversations become training data and ad-targeting fuel. That's not email but surveillance with an inbox attached!
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We provide this service because privacy shouldn't be a premium feature, it should just be how things work by default. Your email here isn't mined or isn't sold, and isn't anyone's business but yours.
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Please sign up to use this service.
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Big corporate email providers read and scan every message that passes through their servers. Your emails become training data and ad-targeting fuel.
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We provide this service because email privacy shouldn't be a premium feature, it should be the default! Your emails here aren't mined or sold. They aren't anyone's business but yours.
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Please sign up to have an email account.